Feedback & Editing Progress
We organised ourselves during this project well as we began production as soon as we could with a meeting that took place after the first session. We sat for over an hour and began to come up with ideas which we could do for the documentary before settling on the idea of a documentary about Park Hill and the I Love You, Will U Marry Me graffiti on the bridge.
After the third shoot day myself and Connor got to work with the edit as to stay on top of all the work we had and so that we could be in sync with the shoot days so we could get any pickups and extra shots if needed. We then presented a 3 minute rough cut a received some feedback on what we did well, but more importantly what we could improve upon.
The first piece of feedback was regarding the narrator we had decided to use. We were told that the voice seemed out of place as he had a very staged voice and didn't fit with the strong Sheffield accents of Katy and Graham, our interviewees. Luckily this was an easy fix as Connor our sound designer is from Sheffield and fit the part perfectly.
The second piece of feedback was about some of the shots we had used not fitting with what was being said on the screen. This was commenting on a shot used over the interview with Graham when he explains how there was a shopping centre on the ground floor of Park Hill, saying the shot wasn't wide enough and was framing the top floor instead of the ground floor. However, later on in the documentary while Katy is saying how 'admirable' Park hill was in the sixties we juxtaposed this with some images of rubbish and needles to convey the overall dark tone of the documentary
After the third shoot day myself and Connor got to work with the edit as to stay on top of all the work we had and so that we could be in sync with the shoot days so we could get any pickups and extra shots if needed. We then presented a 3 minute rough cut a received some feedback on what we did well, but more importantly what we could improve upon.
The first piece of feedback was regarding the narrator we had decided to use. We were told that the voice seemed out of place as he had a very staged voice and didn't fit with the strong Sheffield accents of Katy and Graham, our interviewees. Luckily this was an easy fix as Connor our sound designer is from Sheffield and fit the part perfectly.
The second piece of feedback was about some of the shots we had used not fitting with what was being said on the screen. This was commenting on a shot used over the interview with Graham when he explains how there was a shopping centre on the ground floor of Park Hill, saying the shot wasn't wide enough and was framing the top floor instead of the ground floor. However, later on in the documentary while Katy is saying how 'admirable' Park hill was in the sixties we juxtaposed this with some images of rubbish and needles to convey the overall dark tone of the documentary
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